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PostPosted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 1:22 am    Post subject: Spirit World Reply with quote

I REALLY REALLY LOVE TO TYPE STORIES! So I decided to put one of here! YAYZ!

I was looking at some other stories on here, and I was about to put Pokemon Amethyst on here but then I thought...do I really have to put Pokemon on here? So...here's a little preview of Yu-Gi-Oh Spirit World that I will put on devaintART once I get more typed up. A little present for you for being so kind to me Smile

Ok, I'll shut up now so you can read this.

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[i]There has been many mysteries in this world. The Millennium Items are just one example. However, somewhere out there, there are Duel Monsters Dimensions, 12 in all. Yugi and Atem have crossed into these dimensions temporally but what would’ve happened if they stayed there longer? So, this is where this story comes in mind.  It has been 3 months since Pharaoh Atem left. But just because he left Yugi and his friends, doesn’t mean he can’t come back for more fun…unfortunately, it’s in a most unexpected way…in total pain and darkness…let the Shadow Thorns rise…[/i]

It could’ve been an hour, it could’ve been a week but Pharaoh Atem had enough. It was all dark and painful. Some time ago, although he didn’t know how long it had been, vines suddenly came from nowhere and pulled him into the void. They had tied around his ankles and his wrist. Blood was slowly dripping out of his mouth. He had nowhere to run. It was like he took the pathway to hell. He opened his eyes weakly. “Let me go…” he whispered.

A single vine came out from the void of darkness. “What was that Pharaoh?” it asked in a female voice. “Let me go,” Atem said more sternly. The vine came up to his face and slithered under his neck. “That’s right Pharaoh…you can yell all you want…come on, show me a little anger…” it said, pricking him with it’s thorn. “[b]I SAID LET ME GO[/b]!!” yelled Atem. The vines withdrew back. “Good boy Pharaoh…” it said. Atem spat out some blood. Another vine came up. “What you didn’t know Pharaoh is that I am fueled by anger and darkness…” said the voice. The vine came and wrapped itself around Atem. He screamed in pain. The voice laughed. “Don’t worry, the pain will stop hurting. I’ll take you to a nice safe place, far away from all those people…”

“STOP LYING!” yelled Atem. The vine suddenly charged at the other vine wrapped around the Pharaoh. And [i]it went right through him[/i]. He screamed. It was the worst thing he ever felt in his life…both of his lives. Then, no sound came out of his mouth. His eyes turned gray, with no life. But he was still alive (meh). But he was blind and couldn’t see. Everything was black. Everything was over. He was certainly going to…wait…Atem lifted his head slowly. Something was glowing. But that was weird, he was sure he went blind. Then why was he seeing a glow that he normally couldn’t see?

“[i]Pharaoh…” [/i]said the glow. Atem gasped. He knew that voice. “YUGI!” he yelled. “[i]Pharaoh…I will get rid of the vines…so you can be free…[/i]” said the voice that sounded like Yugi. And he was right. Atem could feel the vines slowly going away. “[i]Mana is waiting for you…she will help you…[/i]” said the voice. “Yugi…Yugi…” Atem gasped. Before he could ask anything else, his whole conscious slipped away.

Yu-Gi-Oh Character (c) Kazuki Takahashi

Comments and Suggestions are welcomed. Rated PG-13 for Blood and Cussing (although you won't see it often)

P.S If any creepers that I know dwell on smackjeeves mention Puzzleshipping and I kill you with a spoon.

Sorry if grammar and/or spelling is horrible. And sorry if some of this seemsallsmashedup *cough*



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