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iWish · Supreme user Joined: 28 Mar 2007 Posts: 147

Hi. My name is Robin. I was known as the coolest kid in school. That is until something happened. I chose to have different friends. My other friends shunned me. But all that doesn't matter. As long as my friends now stick with me. Nothing wrong can happen when I'm with them. At times, I'm their here, At other times, their my heroes.

I hang out with 3 friends. One of them is blind. his name is Stew. People mock him because he isn't able to see. But when they try to hit him, He won't get hurt. It's as if he can actually see the,.The other one is big(fat) so people mess with him. his name is Bret. They make fun of him and think he is the slowest kid ever. But really, he's the fastest kid i know. The other one is really quiet. His name is Grant. Other kids make fun of him because they think he can't talk yet. At times, when he does talk, he stutters a bit too much, but when i'm with him, he talks as normal as possible.

To me, my friends are the world. They are the greatest friends i could ever have. but, if they were ever hurt, I'd blame it on me because i should be helping them. Sometimes I come to think that they have superpowers. But I'm just not positive yet......

Later That night......

"Robin," said Grant with a whisper. "Hmm? what is it Grant? Is something wrong?" said Robin. Grant replied,"nothing's wrong. I have to tell you something."

That's how it is so far. I might continue but I'm just not sure.

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Vye Brante · Administrator Joined: 26 Mar 2007 Posts: 1223

An interesting start. I like how it leaves you hanging like that. Keep it up!
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iWish · Supreme user Joined: 28 Mar 2007 Posts: 147

umm....thanks! eventually the story will stop here and will become a comic at smackjeeves.

Grant said,"Thanks for taking cre of us and being are friends Robin." "Why does it sound like you're about to leave me?"replied Robin.
"Well, in this world we are complete weirdos..,"Grant replied in a sighful way. "In this world?" replied Robin with a confused face. Grant added,"Yeah. In this world. When nobody knows it, we go to a different world. Just to get away from all this." "Let me go with you,"said Juan. Grant sayig with a sighful face once more,"I'm not sure......"

hope you enjoyed that part.
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Vye Brante · Administrator Joined: 26 Mar 2007 Posts: 1223

Making a comic out of it, huh? Cool! Well, you're off to an interesting start.
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iWish · Supreme user Joined: 28 Mar 2007 Posts: 147

Well, I don't think it'll be a comic anymore. Just a story I randomly update now and again.

They enter this world, where they become sonic characters.
~Logging in, Bret the Fox~
Level: 88
Type: Speed Warrior/ Weapons Mster
Attacks
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Speed Sword Strike
Nautical Ninja Nonsense
Speed and Shield
Money:100,000
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~Logging in, Stew the Bird~
Level: 89
Type: Map Leader, Silent Agent
Attacks
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Eyesight Lightning
Gadget Boom
Directional Doom
Money: 99,990
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~Logging in, Grant the Echidna~
Level:87
Type: Tongue Twister/ Extender
Attacks
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Tongue Twister Tradegy
Extendo Fist
Electro Extension Boom
Money: 99,000
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~Logging in, Robin the Hedgehog~
Level: 5
Type: Unkown
Attacks
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Unkown
Money:500

Did't see that coming huh? Yep, That's right, It's a Sonic MMORPG. But it as well has Megaman, Pokemon, and some other stuff. Stay tuned!

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