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DragonhandX · Advanced user Joined: 12 May 2009 Posts: 69

i've been thinking of making a webcomic for a while now. the trouble is that i need a place to keep the strips, and i need help figuring out the dynamics of it.

world info:
world much like ours.
all sorts of races
-humans, elvs, dragonoids, and furries (sonic for example) are just a few.
--dragonoids are the more important ones. there are five different races, western, eastern, wyvern, fur, and phoenixian.
---all dragons have a sacrificial attack, based on their natural element.
----phoenixian dragons don't have a sacrificial attack and are the weakest magic users. this is because when they die, their bodies turn to ash, which turns into an egg, which they hatch from. they don't remember the last couple of minutes before their death, but a ritual can be performed to allow them to remember.
many different elements
-water, fire, earth, air, ice, and forest are the original ones.
--dark and light are sub elements. these can only be trained.
-electric came up when cities were made.
---everyone has a natural element. this is what they get trained in from day one. to learn how to use the other elements they have to train in their usage,
----what your natural element is depends on where you were born/laid.
more will be added later.

Elements:
this is one of the big problems. i can't quite get the weaknesses and resistances right.
-here is a diagram of elements:
*NEW!!!*W->Fi->I->E->A->Fo->W
this is something that i'm hoping will get questions. the problems are that air and earth don't have something that they are good against.
dark and light are always at war because they are, dark and light Rolling Eyes

dark and light are good against each other (i'll need to recheck that) and are resistant to themselves.
-the dark and light have different sections. neither of them are evil or good, the war started because of an argument over pi. to join one or the other you have to vow to certain guidelines. breaking these guidelines result in getting outlawed. of you're outlawed you will still get attacked by the other side (a lot more often because you will be weaker without the free source of energy in the section). you can also get attacked by your own side, depending on how major it is (like say, killing the leader. but breaking the rules one too many times won't get a price on your head.) if you get majorly outlawed, you get 10 days before you're allowed to be killed on sight.
another much rarer element is ''raw power''. it's what everyone uses, it's just that a water user uses it differently from an ice or earth user. it's where healing powers are from and most of the other attacks (all magical items/abilities are in some way connected to raw power)

character info:
Steelwing: age:??? gender:male job:mercenary
Western fire/dark dragon.
Co-founder of The Dragon's Hands and is the Left Hand.
weapons:two brass knuckles with claws and magic.
abilities:
agile
majorly magical
behind the front lines
infiltration
sparring
personality:
Steelwing loves to spar. whenver it's mentioned he smirks and there is a glint in his eye. does not like ''to the death'' matches. prefers ''till unconscience/uncle'' matches.
DhX: age:??? gender:male job:mercenary
pheonixian fire dragon.
Co-founder of The Dragon's Hands and is the Right Hand.
weapons:Deg (Double Ended Glaive) [whenever they get slammed into the ground and a weather is yelled out by the wielder, that weather occurs] and MS (Mood Swords) [has a different power depending on the wielder's mood]
abilities:
block
minorly magical
front lines
kick down the door
researches employers/targets
personality:
DhX is indifferent about fighting. he prefers getting it done and moving on. does not have a sense of humor (actually does) and is an excellent actor. more will be added later.
WsC: is DhX's evil side. is a completely dark user. has been hiding behind a ''wall'' in DhX's subconscience. loves to torture. more will be added later.
Cendrick: air furdragon. loves to explore. majorly magical. is the son of Steelwing.
Xan: A humorous person. lives with Cirelc and is going out with her. fights by dodging and counterattacking.
Cirelc: an alien that uses raw power for healing purposes. lives with Xan and is going out with him. is a completely healing person, but does have a hammer.
Galax: an alien that uses raw power. which is how he summons spacial rock out of thin air. wanders around. uses magical attacks based on space (comet ___).
Dr. Bionice: the sub villain. insane. attacks are based around biology and is using raw power unknowingly. more neutral than evil.
Jack, the Bricker: Dr. Bionice's head lackey. attacks using bricks of various abilities. always teleport back.

geez, that's some word wall

a lot more will be added later. and if i catch something made on this, i will get you. i have spent days working on this and i don't want it copied. if you want to use ask permission to.

i'm hoping for people to ask questions on clarification and ones that might help me out.

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Vye Brante · Administrator Joined: 26 Mar 2007 Posts: 1223

Sounds pretty interesting so far! Keep us updated, I supose.
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BlackCatz · Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 4:39 pm Post subject: Yeah!

Do keep us updated.. it sounds totally interesting!

:D

DragonhandX · Advanced user Joined: 12 May 2009 Posts: 69

i have made an edit. and since i don't know if making an edit shows something new on the board, i'm posting this. also i want questions.
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the being · Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 8:20 pm Post subject:

heheheh.
this all so very interesting.
How about earth be strong against Ice, and electric weak against air?
oh, and, can i get clarification on the 'aliens'? what i mean is, what makes them 'aliens'? like, characteristics, etc.

this is extremely intreseting, and i really do hope it gets off the ground. it'll be like, my 2nd non-pokemon comic in my favorites. xD

DragonhandX · Advanced user Joined: 12 May 2009 Posts: 69

i'm leaving electric, light, and dark out of it because electric came around when cities became a lot more common (and some don't view it as an actual element) and dark and light are sub elements.

originally earth was weak to ice. but then rocks break ice which is part of earth.

they are not from the planet. and there is a 10th element, which i'll be posting on the top one.

i hope it lifts off too. once i'm done getting the mechanics right, get a place where i can transfer strips to here, and designs.
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the being · Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 7:51 pm Post subject:

mmm, not what i meant. xD
I kinda already knew they would be from another planet. sorta obvious. i meant, like, do they have horns on their head, their skin is green, i mean, what do they look like. heh. I mean, just saying "alien" doesn't say much, but hey, you are still getting this all together. ;D

mm.
how about the wind element be strong against the water element? you know, since hurricanes/tropical storms/tornadoes get more strength from the ocean(water)?

DragonhandX · Advanced user Joined: 12 May 2009 Posts: 69

ah. if they do, they are using raw power to use illusions.

you know, instead of trying to even the types out (the so called ''original ones'') why don't i just make them weak to nothing and strong against one thing?
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the being · Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 2:36 am Post subject:

hrm...?
:/
how can an element be weak against nothing and strong against something...?

that would make something weak against something.

ex. Fire is weak against nothing, but is good against forest.
that means forest is weak against fire. and thus, makes a cycle.

hm. well, anyway, the new element cycle thing you updated seems fine to me. ;D

DragonhandX · Advanced user Joined: 12 May 2009 Posts: 69

this is the ELEMENTS we're talking about.

oh, Galax and Cirelc don't know how to cast illusions.

i think a plot should be that Galax is found using a supernova like blast {one of the strongest light elemental attacks} jby some light guys and is worshipped as god, by the evil section.
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XANA · Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 5:05 am Post subject:

I like this, I would love to see more. Smile

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DragonhandX · Advanced user Joined: 12 May 2009 Posts: 69

the problem is that i'm stuck and i can't think up of anything more.

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